mariogamer2010's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Recovery Release Issue]

Constructive Criticiam

Work on the animation a little
Make it a little less crazy.

KingDavidProductions responds:

crazy is my style buddy.

[My third short flash anim]

Constructive Criticism

Animation 0/5
PAINT? YOU GOT TO BE KIDDING ME! Microsoft Paint?
That is crazy talk, use real flash! MS paint is banned from newgrounds!

Fighting 0/5
Wow, 4 seconds of fighting and about 30 seconds of funeral?
Goal: Add at least 20 more seconds of fighting for a 1

Quality and Quantity: 0000.1/5
You sure put no quality to the fight, but loads of quantity at the funeral?
Goal: Try to even them out for a 1

Stickmen: 0/5
Sorry stickmen aren't suppost to be on newgrounds, its just another one of there rules, sorry!
Goal: Don't use stickmen

Background design and music: 0/5
At least put some sky, or some sad music for the funeral.
Goal: Don't use ms paint at all, dont use pivot! use a professional animation with original characters for a 1.4

Rating: Horrible!!!

Theuberkilla responds:

I am not using paint U idiot im using adobe flash cs5

[Julius Caesar Proj]

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Animation: Slow, Terribly out of sync, 3 - 4 minute waits at times
Waiting: Boring
Sleeping: Twice

Constructive Critisism:
First: Fix the sync
Second: Make the mouth animations during the characters voices quicker to stop the waiting
Third: Hurry up

Non-Skiid responds:

Yes, keep in mind this was a class project and i had a deadline. I feared that if I made the mouth animation more realistic, I wouldn't finish in time.

[Search On!]

umm

Pretty cool, even though only flashes are aloud on newgrounds, i respect it and ill support you

Lucaseify responds:

it is a flash. Its might look like it, but it really is.